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Sunday, May 07, 2006


Sometimes my head goes numb!

sometimes my head goes numb!
For staring too long at the phone
Hoping you would call
Or even still just text
But all I get is silence;
Yes Silence.

sometimes my head goes numb!
when I refresh my inbox a 1000 times
Hoping to find mail from you
But all I get is an empty inbox;
"O unread mails".

sometimes my head goes numb!
When I pass by your place
hoping to catch a glimpse of you
Hoping you might atleast say something
But all I see are closed curtains;
windows tightly shut.

sometimes my head goes numb!
when instead of listening to you
I stare deep into your dark eyes
Hoping you would see my longing
But all I see is my own reflection;
reflected back.

But the more I try to move on,
the more I try to let go
The more I realize
that my head has grown numb;
Completely numb!
cause am in Love with you!








# posted by moggaless : 7:26 PM 28 Feedback
Comments:
wow first here...
haki check ur bulk mail the mail could be goin there lol...nice poem btw
# posted by Blogger Spidey/Tato : 8:34 PM
 
Aki Torments, I think you're in my head. That is EXACTLY how I've been feeling the last few months.

Like I keep looking inside every dark blue station wagon I see hoping its him.... and I always peep into his compound when i drive past him hoping to catch a glimpse of him......

Eeeeee ma!
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 10:33 AM
 
Life is all about waiting isnt it...waiting for eternity for that one purpose that we dont know...
# posted by Blogger gP : 1:47 PM
 
hey,
love your blog...yiu can view mine at http://alexcia.blogspot.com/
# posted by Blogger alexcia : 4:46 PM
 
Very nice tho sad
# posted by Blogger Girl in the Meadow : 1:07 PM
 
how are you doing brother?
# posted by Blogger gP : 6:47 PM
 
wow, great writing...as always!
# posted by Blogger Kristy : 10:09 PM
 
wow, that's a beautiful poem, I so relate to the refreshing your inbox thing, although in a different context.
# posted by Blogger W. : 6:14 PM
 
beautiful poem..I so relate to that part about refreshing your inbox, although in a different context.
# posted by Blogger W. : 6:47 PM
 
yeah... F5. best friend. worst enemy.

nice site :) great writing.

funny that Garfield strip. I was about to scan one for my next post. weird.
# posted by Blogger swan_pr : 4:03 AM
 
bro...where are you???
# posted by Blogger gP : 3:30 PM
 
its been while ..how come there is no new of your poetry...I have been touched by words let us hear more of it
# posted by Blogger iamnasra : 11:23 PM
 
life goes dumb
# posted by Blogger Known Stranger : 4:40 AM
 
Actually i liked this one a lot...

Somehow...i can follow it, relate to it

Lovely.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 11:36 AM
 
Its true isnt it...the more you try to get over it the more you realize what the other person means to you. I guess you just dont think about the whole thing until then.

Nice poem
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 4:40 PM
 
Its been long time ...I hope you are around...Ar u
# posted by Blogger iamnasra : 10:39 PM
 
are you still around?
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 12:18 PM
 
dont stop here let us here more of these
# posted by Blogger iamnasra : 12:16 AM
 
Its been awhile where are you and where is ur poetry

Nasra
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 6:16 PM
 
I hoep all is well with you ..long time no words from u
# posted by Blogger iamnasra : 8:44 AM
 
I went tru such a phase sometimes last year n I know how depressin it's.
Thanx for remindin me that Life's about that!!
# posted by Blogger Klara : 8:06 PM
 
this is how I feel this week. thank you for your awesome words
# posted by Blogger Kristy : 3:00 AM
 
First time reading your blog....n ua Torments you have talent..nice poetry!
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 5:23 PM
 
I love this blog. This particular post is exactly how life with my ex was and the sucky thing was I loved him anyway.
You are an amazing writer.
# posted by Blogger Darlkom : 4:53 PM
 
Splendid, deep poem.it reflects my experience. I guess y they say love is pain.
# posted by Blogger Anthony : 12:19 PM
 
This is something I can totally relate to.
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 10:48 AM
 
cant resist to leave a few words at my old friends 'home' on the internet. those were the days.
# posted by Blogger gP : 8:33 PM
 
I know this is 2.5 years since your last post but I do hope you still write poetry. You do write extremely well.

Have you ever published any of your poetry??
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 11:23 PM
 
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